I would consider to incorparate slight dof (for those shrubs in front to be straight open). It would give You more depth. It looks old type photography, but You don't have any flaws of that.. I mean simle Vigneting would give You bit more efffect on that BnW photography.
Plust vertical shift is anoing, but maybe jsut for me =) Tilt shift lenses were on the market at that time.
Keep up =)